September 23rd, 2008

RPG's

Arc Blurb

Well, my Arc blurb is basically done.

It says everything I want to say, but no quite how I want to say it. I'm not sure what I need to change yet, so I'm opening it up to the floor.

Have a look at it, and tell me what you think. All comments and advice listened to, but not necessarily followed.

Edit: I've just changed it due to some others advice. Same location.